Total Love Poem by arnab gupta
Total Love
You define me
your full body
your white skin
your lovely dimples
Yes, you define me.
Your lovely dimples
some are red
some are black
some are brown
yes, you are a sight to behold.
How can I live without you?
you are my addiction
you are my first love
Yes, yes, yes, I love you pizza.
Thursday, June 3, 2010
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5/3/2024 10:28:03 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Delicious, Pictorial and more than this, legible. Since it is very short poem it always looks good. What it lacks, the more subtle word and narrow lines and curved flow. Suppose one can compare hot tawa to the morning sun, and breads are dancing on tawa. So your portrayal of the Pizza can be more interesting and tasty. Anyhow your theme is good, but needs some more spice in portrayal.