' ' ' ' ' Toshi Doshi(Year After Year) - For Rosemary Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' Toshi Doshi(Year After Year) - For Rosemary

Rating: 2.6


In an attempt to change
from lunar to
calendar

Autumn
occurs twice

in 1691
Japan.

Confusing for birds,
tides, humans &
the moon.

The moon lies awake
as Basho sleeps.

Basho is wide awake
as now the moon

sleeps.

Time...will never be
the same again.

Basho basho ni
(Basho on horse back)
Waka-gama...meigetsu
(Poetry Mountain...full moon)
hoshi...haigoshi.
(star...through leaves)

toshi doshi toshi doshi toshi doshi toshi doshi toshi doshi doshi toshi doshi toshidoshi toshidoshitoshidosh toshidoshidoshidoshidoshi

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 07 August 2009

In a search of anomalies, you make them worthy pretty little treasures and using a simple fact 'Autumn occurs twice in 1691 Japan' you spin your poem like an eager spider his delicate net. I like it!

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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