Tomorrow Poem by Ash Moore

Tomorrow

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Have you ever heard of desire
That feeling of want and cravings
The need for you here is dire
But my mind is telling me:

Tomorrow is another day
To make this thirst go away
I hope you give me another day
Because I have so much to say

Bottled up emotions, my hand
Can't take the way you just up and left
Thoughts of you I cannot band
You're what I want and

Tomorrow won't come again
Unless you're with me
I can't let go of your hand
I need you now, a simple need

I need you now, more than just a need
You take me higher, you're more than just a desire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Adamyan 22 May 2010

It was so nice reading. Flew like a chocolate river. Good work, Ask me Later!

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Josh Forsyth 26 May 2010

Great, naturally flowing, and can be read over and over again with different views taken each and every time. Very wonderful.

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Higher calling. Desire can have such a strong pull. Good work Enjoyed the read.

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Kristopher Delander 26 May 2010

you are very good at writing and i hope you keep it up.

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Marieta Maglas 25 May 2010

Wonderful theme.....so great idea.......Thank you for presenting such a wonderful work

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Vaughn Bekker 24 May 2010

nice poem, thank you for sharing: 0)

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