Token Of Gratitude Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Token Of Gratitude

Rating: 5.0


Ya Allah your love and generosity
Has killed the egotistical outlook
Towards this nonsensical world
Acknowledge this little token
Of gratitude from a pining heart

© Aarzoo Mehek

Token Of Gratitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2021

Hardly a few can delve deep into the essence of this prayer. I find the representation of troubled tortured souls through your poem. It's easy to present happiness of others but difficult to potroy their agony unless a poet feels their pains. You are doing a wonderful job. Keep writing!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2021

Typos: There are some inadvertent typographical errors. Please correct them. I take this poignant poem to my favourite...top score!

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 15 December 2021

Dheron Daad 5******

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 15 December 2021

Very true. Unless we surrender to the wishes of Almighty we roam without radar. Profound poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 December 2021

Beautiful, evocative, simple and sincere poem. Well expressed and crafted.

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Kostas Lagos 14 December 2021

Five stars. It is a pity that I can't rate this poem with more stars

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David Wood 14 December 2021

We have to go with the flow, even when nothing makes sense.

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