Together Poem by Houda Boukassoula

Together

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TOGETHERNESS
Looking like blossoming sprouts
Nourished by the same water and ground
Heated between sun and cloud
Cuddled by a gentle breeze
Together we used to grow

severed when winds are fully blown
We may turn white, yellow or brown
As winters into autumns flow
Profound joy and sufferings we undergo
A deep sigh might release the sorrow As time marks we try not to show

If only we choose to grow together
Hand in hand we may swim across the river
We will certainly reach the shore
May be tired
May be sick or old With a past we cannot wow
Yet we'll safely cross together
At the end of a tunnel we will see a glow

If only together, not alone
We choose where to go
And make a bright future our vow.

Together
Thursday, December 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,love,together,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 29 December 2017

A beautiful, deep write that we are all on a journey of our own making, to be nourished by positivity and faith!

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Houda Boukassoula 01 January 2018

Thanks a lot dear Hazel Durham, a very insightful comment

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2017

A deep sigh can release the sorrow At the end of a tunnel we see a glow When together not alone we choose where togo.......simply soooooo fine a poem.. it goes to the heart when i read your poem.. your poetic talents are great........ thank you dear poetes.. please write and write..... tony

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Akhtar Jawad 21 December 2017

The two ends of the tunnel, but lucky to see a glow at the exit tunnel. Thoughtful poem.

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Houda Boukassoula 22 December 2017

Thanks a lot

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Kusum Gala 21 December 2017

At the end of the tunnel we see the glow..I like it. Keep writing.

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Houda Boukassoula 22 December 2017

Thanks for the encouragement, pleased that you liked my poem

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