-to A Past Lover.. A Wish To Make You Happy. Poem by Dislocated Heart

-to A Past Lover.. A Wish To Make You Happy.

Rating: 5.0


Hey lil' lady,
I was thinkin bout you last night.
I kno you moved on..
& Thats alright.

But all im sayin he Better treat you right.
He better buy you flowers in the middle of the night.

I hope ya last forever.
cuz ya seem good together.

I hope you got the biggest smile,
when he says hi.

I hope he wont hurt you,
Or say goodbye.

I wished for you to be happy.
And i hope it comes true.

Cuz you mean somethin to me..
And im sure, you mean something to him too.

So good luck, Take care.
Have the time of your life.
dont be scared to love,
risk it all or dont risk at all.

I'm wishin for you to be happy :)

Keep goin strong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaotic Life - Curly M. 06 October 2008

wow...this is a different person than ive know b4..i meant by your writting. its not the same as the old times, and thats a good thing..i think. n.e ways, great poem there, it was really sweet, ur ex should really read this, itll probably make her feel hopefull and know that you still care for her, even if u guys had spilt up. good job, i think you're getting very good at this whole poem thingy. love the rhyme scheme in that poem. yea...thats all i gotta say umm.. peace..

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Ashok Kumar 15 September 2008

Nice One. I liked the lines 'dont be scared to love, risk it all or dont risk at all.'

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Awe...that's sweet. I love this poem! It's a fantastic write! Keep them coming! I love reading them! Peace out, Lexi Baby.

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