Tiniest Dust Poem by Bharati Nayak

Beautiful marriage of philosophy and poetry- - thoughts like birds making their way through infinity- your use of imagery defines your ability as a poet to reach your audience with just the right words and scenes.

Truly, nothing is a big thing but accumulation of tiny things.

Life is not beyond the classic theme of five phenomena (i.e five elements) being rooted in the depth of philosophy relating to life and world, tiniest dust like a feeling of Universal Feeling has been personified and embodied in this poem by the poet.; however the first four lines in this poem got ignited in its infinite perspective, and five lines in middle get broken its cadence of thought, but last eight lines have taken again the poetic theme to a classic corner to spread its universal flavor........it would be better if the poet could sustain her inner tremor of thought to the last....thanks a lot

Fabulous poem with a good philosophy.

But I can fly In the vastness of the universe In the timelessness of the sky Flapping my virtuous wings of the virtual I write my name in visual Appear they in white and blackmadam so sweet poem thanks for shearing 10++++-

bharati, hi i like the image this summons for me- a shaft of light coming through a tree, a door, a window full of dust motes. all of them poems. glen

Thank you very much.Your comments as well as all friends' comments are the 'positives' that give strength to the tiniest dust to keep flying.

Your humble poem renders magnanimous credits to other living and non-living elements.......that is the best method to gain wisdom...you may be the tiniest dust but your wisdom beggars description....