Time Poem by sneha jawaharya

Time



I never stop
I never wait,
I am never early,
I am never late.
Show me respect
You will succeed,
Neither there be a failure
Nor a need to plead.
Impossible is the thought
That you can hold me,
Following this thought
Only failures I've seen.
You can never hold me
I am that sand,
The more you try
More I will slip from your hand.
You can rewind the clock
But cannot bring me back,
Nothing can bring me back
Once i have left.
Never overtake me
Never stay back,
Only work accordingly
That is what I have said.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sneha Jawaharya 22 September 2012

thanks for the advice namarta nath.

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Namrata Nath 19 September 2012

hey sneha! i am namrata nath. i liked ur poem. plz read my poems too. i m also new. just use some tough words and some devices in ur poem. otherwise, ur idea is good! :)

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