Through The Cracks Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Through The Cracks

Rating: 5.0


When one stripes the stony rocks,
Beauty is unveiled through the cracks,
How soft is the stone hidden in frocks!
I see beauty in the feminine packs.
Nature is a woman with breasts and valleys
Beauty walks over drunk through the alleys.

Walk slowly and kiss it from the dreamy eyes
This blendamaid dislikes aggressive walks
Be blue and calm with stars like the skies
Eye to eye, heart to heart, the silent talks.
Looks so easy in a wet night, can dream and ink,
Not so easy, yet easy in love, I feel and I think!

Through The Cracks
Monday, September 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On a beautiful post by Marie Shine.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 04 September 2018

Akhtar, such an splendid poem.........................10+++++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2018

A wonderful poem that captures the beauty and wonders of nature. Great imagery. Well crafted write.10]

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Kelly Kurt 04 September 2018

The inspiration of nature.

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William Shakespeare 04 September 2018

O the cracks through which beauty appears. I'm swooning neath the stars. My comment is 400 yrears old. I have a time machine. I remember your goatee.

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Rajnish Manga 04 September 2018

Great use of metaphor to explain the exquisite beauty of nature. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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Dillip Dill 04 September 2018

You are cracked. Cracked this poen I mean.

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