michael oliver

Rookie - 97 Points (13-4-1948 / swansea)

Three more homage to 'JJ'


1 to be a maitre d'

leaning on the bar
with a white shirt
with bored black eyes

walking to the window
walking with a limp
walking with a shrug

staring at the street
nothing is with passing
nothing is with daylight

past the diners returns
past the with coffees
past the with talk

resumes with his leaning
still white shirt with
those solitary black eyes


2 the clinical interior

- the clinical interior
the eating postures - the smooth fork
hold the subject - I remember you
You had two - yes he had
another had three - bits of tomato
the analysis continues -


3by a window

though together they seem apart
in cool grey in cool light
a silent prayer of distraced pose
and some finesse removed from acknowledgement
the cup cupped in feminine hands
nor speaking not looking but rapport
he stands she arranges their food
she then speaks he sitting listens

Submitted: Tuesday, January 22, 2013
Edited: Saturday, October 26, 2013
Listen to this poem:

Form:


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Three more homage to 'JJ' by michael oliver )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie - 72 Points Scotty Dogg (1/23/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    This is FANTASTIC! So unique you are, Sir! I love the duplication of words in parts. I love the solitary black eyes. I love the 3 and the 2 etc. (The numbers in the small titles) I love poets that paint pictures and you're one of the best at it. BRAVO!

    Now I'm going to attemp to send this. I'll copy and paste it in case I have to send to your email. (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  2. If, Rudyard Kipling
  3. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  4. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  5. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  6. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  7. As I Grew Older, Langston Hughes
  8. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  10. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep, Mary Elizabeth Frye

Poem of the Day

poet Oliver Wendell Holmes

YES, write, if you want to, there's nothing like trying;
Who knows what a treasure your casket may hold?
I'll show you that rhyming's as easy as lying,
...... Read complete »

   

New Poems

  1. Love's Curse Befell None, Jayatissa Liyanage
  2. Saturday's Sultry Soho Spinster {Alliter.., Frank James Ryan Jr...FjR
  3. Reality of Love - 3: Life Sans Bonds, Jayatissa Liyanage
  4. My End, Zanzoo Mindanase
  5. Reality of Love - 2: Veiled Motive, Jayatissa Liyanage
  6. Imagining a Vessel in a Rock on a Beach, Johanna Boal
  7. Reality of Love - 1: Elements, Jayatissa Liyanage
  8. E s o t e r i c a {An Exercise in Ornate.., Frank James Ryan Jr...FjR
  9. Silent Light, William Waterway
  10. Birthday, Gunde Narsing Rao
[Hata Bildir]