This Woman Poem by George BernardBloodyShaw

This Woman

Rating: 4.1


This woman.
That separate
Entity
Who would say
She's in love
With me.

How come
For it to be?

Well, I'm only
An entity.

What is this?

Will it be
For eternity?

Well,

That's life.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 29 November 2008

Great piece very well written. I hope that you hang on to forever most people don't. You know it is nice to know that someone can write this in humour about their spouse and yet in it's meaning the message is sort of sweet.

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'That's life'? No - that was Esther Ranting, and that was always a conclusion to things she didn't quite know how to deal with. I'd say..... consider yourself the luckiest man in the world....... t x

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Francesca Johnson 29 November 2008

Top marks for this one, George. I found it beautiful. More of the same, please. Fran xxx

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