This Time (Love Poem) Poem by monica monet

This Time (Love Poem)

Rating: 4.8


This time
I hoped to smile

Expect nothing
be perfectly discreet
cool as melon
in control

Then he appeared
Exquisite…Remote…

Composure left
poise vanished
logic fled

Feeling gauche
words inept
blushing
lost

Unable to know
that it’s all right
to be at sea
and be
worthwhile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akram Awadat 15 December 2009

good poem thanks for sharing

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george george 02 December 2009

Amazing how such strong attraction can leave us speechless! Captures the awkward feeling of inadequacy at such a moment. Well done.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 27 November 2009

Love is in the air...?

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