These Arms Poem by lost lindsey

These Arms

Rating: 3.5


These limbs I have
These arms I call mine
holding myself in my pain and agony

These tan arms stretch outward
looking for something more
than the excuse of scars

Nothing is on them but freckles
from a warm sun, a fanciful thought
of it has been cast down.

Having held a beautiful girl
promising safety on a hopeless breath
to breathe in fresh air is a scarce thing.

Living in a cold place
with a pallid face
and limpid lies

I feel the sting of regret
and hear the song of hate
praising my name

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 18 November 2013

I've read your poem but couldn't understand what you wanted to convey by these lines: 'Having held a beautiful girl promising safety on a hopeless breath to breathe in fresh air is a scarce thing.' And.. 'I feel the sting of regret and hear the song of hate praising my name' Why do you hear the song of hate praise your name? I would appreciate if you could kindly throw some light.

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