There Are Times, At Times, The Time Stops. Poem by Sumita Jetley

There Are Times, At Times, The Time Stops.

Rating: 3.5


Jingle of the times,
Rhymes in the Chimes.

They ring & wring themselves,
Repeatedly and the music comes
Undone.

Saturday, April 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sinking
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Feeling sinks in, when the feelings sink away.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 April 2015

Rhymes in the chimes. Wonderful drafting of this poem is attractive.10. Nice one.

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