The World Would Be Better Without Me Poem by Cmack Estevez

The World Would Be Better Without Me



The world would be better without me
I'm sinking
I'm drowning
My girl let me go
I don't exist anymore
I can't feel emotional anymore.
I can't dream about her.
I'm dead.
The dreadful memories of a break up hurts
The world wins.
I lose
It always kept me down.
Everything is falling apart.
With me existing the world suffers.
Without me I'm out the way.
My system makes me feel tragic.
There's no magic
There's no love
Just her letting me go.
Not holding me tight.
But making me cold.
I wish I could be bold enough to face the fact that I can't give up and I could break down this burden world into five down to zero.
The world isn't my creation.
I'm fading.
I'm losing control.
She's letting me go.
I'm falling.
I'm crying in my heart.
I'm dying.
And lastly I'm lost forever and forgotten.

Wednesday, March 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: reality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cmack Estevez
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Smith 23 March 2016

Probably everyone has had a breakup that made them feel this way. It's good to be honest with yourself that you're hurting, but don't think that your heart will stay broken forever.... It's just the way things go. No reason to dwell on this one too long. Until then, good luck buddy

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Cmack Estevez

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Hammond Louisiana
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