The World Around Me Poem by Analissa Range

The World Around Me

Rating: 2.7


The world around me
Is like a gold lined tomb
A Beautiful work of art
That holds hidden dangers

The world around me
Is like a rubber band streched tight
The tention keeps building and building
Untill it breaks with a painfull snap

The world around me
Is like a screen saver
a picture created by someone else
to hide the wrongs of others

The world around me
is like a golden treasure
fought over through time
to be possesed by only one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
. . 22 January 2009

what wonderful and realistic metaphors. you really do a great job of characterizing the world as you see it and showing how to live is a beautiful and risky thing at the same time.

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Mia Satterthwaite 23 August 2008

Hello I love this poem, very real and true at times.

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