The Wall Poem by Charles (Tweets) Connor

The Wall

Rating: 4.8


Why did I build around my soul, a wall?
One that is so wide, strong and tall.

Was it for protection of my precious fragile soul?
What harm is there to befall my soul?

The reason indeed,
As are my need,
Is to see who cares enough to break it down!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Searle 04 November 2009

Nice one man. Simple but so true

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I don't think that testing love's strength is the right thing to do... I do agree, making others to feel jealous it's very trendy, but also discouraging... you might realise one day that your partner will walk away... Good write... Thank you for sharing...

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Tai Chi Italy 09 October 2009

Well of course! we test loves strength...there is something irresistibly challenging for me...it is a life long thing. Smiling at you Tai

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Charles (Tweets) Connor

Charles (Tweets) Connor

Cape Town, South Africa
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