The Vows Of The Eyes Poem by Rose Kanana

The Vows Of The Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Today i take the vow to love you
To behold you
And to cherish you
When i look straight into your eyes
I see the truthfulness in you
Without a blink
Your eyes emit assurance

Eyes speak much about love
And that is what your eyes have spoken to my heart
Our past may not be as white as linen
But our tomorrow dictates we live today
For yesterday is gone
Let us stick to the message of our eyes

We promise to be human
For human beings don't mask emotions
You will see my sad emotions through
The same eyes that you now see love emotions
Together we shall handle all emotions
Let your eyes be the window to my life with you
For guilty eyes look away

Unfaithful eyes will never meet faithful eyes
Allow me to read your eyes
Not your voice
For me to understand the depth of love
through the inner eyes is us
For today i take the vow
To love, behold and cherish you

Monday, October 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Random thoughts through the eye of lovers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Kerubo 31 October 2016

Thanks for sharing Rose.This is a well crafted love poem...eyes don't lie a 10 for this

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Collins Waswa 31 October 2016

in the eyes of a lover truth is never masked.A good piece of work Rose.

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Ruth Nyokabi 31 October 2016

Words well articulated and very nice piece of work Unfaithful eyes will never meet faithful eyes Allow me to read your eyes Not your voice For me to understand the depth of love through the inner eyes is us For today i take the vow To love, behold and cherish you

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James Mwenda 31 October 2016

these are sweet words expressed in a very simplistic way, a request that lovers yearn for...outer eyes reading inner beauty.Kudos Rose

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Earnest Gatuma 06 November 2016

Fidelity and confidentiality really is what perpetuates a good marriage.Nice work Kanana, very original.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 November 2016

To behold you. Love and dreams. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nancy Majau 03 November 2016

sweet for lovers. an eye opener.faithfulness is the key to good relationship

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Nancy Majau 03 November 2016

Dear Rose,this is a nice piece for lovers. meant for each other,caring for each other without looking back.touching each others heart with truth and faithfulness.those in love be faithful to the end its the beauty of life

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Rose Kanana 04 November 2016

Thanks for taking time to comment Nancy...miss u.

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Brenda Aniban 02 November 2016

With all rights acknowledged Rose, i will recite this in my wedding day soon. A wonderful piece

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