The Vital Force Poem by Gangadharan nair Pulingat..

The Vital Force

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In the early dawn I am awoke
With a slight laziness in my mind
But you comes and blesses me
with an inspiration to start with
Asking me to be active throughout the day
My blessings, child are there in you
My room is blessed with beautiful rays
Where lot of energy is stock piled
He comes in a golden chariot everyday
And asks to be energetic in life terms
The essence of life is blessed energy
Every breath we takes carries the force
Not to worried about the future more
It is my own will that implemented here
The charioteer a beautiful celestial
The chariot wonderfully carved in gold
The invaluable jewels are ornamented
It made somewhere in heaven by the sculpture
Ready to take the challenge of rays of sun
And abide by the rules that comes precedent
The sun says I am here as long as I am
I carries the vital force of earth here
This vegetation, river, mountain and nature
My own blessings all goes well
The seeds of trees are kept in my treasure
Carefully nurtures for beauty and existence
The great nature always thankful to me
You are mistaken the notions of dawn and dusk
I am a hardworking phenomenon for public welfare
I am repeating my journeys from the start ups
Stands with truth every time and everywhere
Irrespective of your attempt to hide the truth
The golden covered truth I brings transparent
The golden colored shawls I remove time to time
You decides east and west and rise and set
But I am neither rise or set in days
A continuous journey for your own sake

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is believed sun comes in a golden chariot and charioteer is Arun who is beautiful in ancient poetry and epics of India which is a great imagination.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 02 July 2015

A great write. Truly admiring.Loved reading this lovely poem.

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Ahmad Husain 02 July 2015

Well, sir, the poem is a masterwork, but still there's a minute grammatical mistake in the third line. It is written that 'You comes and blesses me'. I think it should be 'You come and bless me'.

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