The Synchronized Heart Beats Poem by Rose Kanana

The Synchronized Heart Beats

Rating: 5.0


He spread the red roses petals in his bed
He lit the candles
He placed two wine glasses by the bedside
He Switched on the radio-the music was soothing
The fragrance -inviting
The mood for the evening was set

He had rehearsed the entire week
On one Knee he was to go a second time
This time he was sure God had send him an angel for a wife Their heart beat seemed synchronized from heaven
They both knew that the Lord had spoken
As children of God they had to obey

The Mood became tantalizing
He rehearsed more and more the lyrics
He was sure her weight could not break his back
He would carry her to where the petals lay waiting
The hour of the princess arrival came
He could smell her fragrance from a distance

The rehearsed moves seemed elusive at this hour of need
His well rehearsed lyrics, sweet words deserted his tongue
He cooed and whimpered like a baby
He went down on the wrong knee
He held the diamond ring in the wrong hand
He developed some goosebumps

The husky voice of the nurse shouted....Next patient please
That is how his day dream ended-Back to work

Tuesday, August 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Collins Waswa 23 August 2016

I like the flow....sounded very real Rose till the nurse woke up the doctor or clinical officer from the day dream.

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Rose Kanana 16 September 2016

At times we sleep and day dream...

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Eliza Mwendwa 16 September 2016

I was flowing with the poem, I identified with the man, only to realize he was day dreaming? Nice peace

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Rose Kanana 16 September 2016

hehehe day dreamers create suspense

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Nancy Majau 01 September 2016

Wao! i like the flow...but the suspense was louder than words

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Rose Kanana 16 September 2016

sure it must have been

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2016

The fragrance of love! Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Kanana 16 September 2016

Thanks for comment Louis

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James Mwenda 24 August 2016

Can we synchronize our heartbeats Rose? that would be awesome....well written peace.

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Charity Karimi 24 August 2016

What a suspense you have created greatly.love it.

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