The Sunset Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Sunset

Rating: 4.7


I watched intently
The setting sun's dying rays
Glistened off the hill.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Wednesday, October 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 24 October 2019

An amazing haiku, dear ate Rose......10+++

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 October 2019

I read Kostas' Now the sun can rise', and now yours, The Sunset, a Haiku that takes you to a sunset yon of the hill. Beautiful.

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Sandra Feldman 24 October 2019

Your words carry us to the scene and we participate in the feeling. Only the great can do that!

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Kostas Lagos 24 October 2019

Really beautiful image RM!

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 October 2019

Captivating imagery

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Rebecca Navarre 03 November 2021

Moments of the setting sun so beautifully captured here! .. Again with ever such moving feelings! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Robert Austin 13 November 2020

The sunset such a beautiful sight great write Rose...10+

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Bipasha D 01 September 2020

Beautiful imagery! I am someone who gets excited during a sunrise or sunset and every other day I take photos in my phone to keep those memories alive :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 April 2020

sun's dying rays Glistened off the hill. even in the death, the rays glisten and gives beauty to the hill and to you who observe it. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 November 2019

A wonderful poem that drags me to read it again and again!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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