The Story Of A Poem Poem by David Keig

The Story Of A Poem

Rating: 4.3


T'other day i wrote a poem
Weren't that much i guess
Had to do so much rhyming
And it all turned out a mess
Then i got meself to thinkin'
What was i trying to do
Was i tryin' to write a poem
Or flushing ma thoughts down the loo?
Y'see i started off this poem
Thinkin' i'd be honest, see
Then this awful bloody rhyming
Sort of got control of me
I wanted to say 'angry'
But 'concerned' just rhymed much better
Then i wanted to say 'email'
But ended up just saying 'letter'
This poetry's confusing
So will someome say to me
Whether i be writing poems
Or just tellin' you 'bout me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
angel Lawson 11 March 2019

what a good poem. i like how u said Then i wanted to say 'email' But ended up just saying 'letter'

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Paul Warren 29 June 2015

Thankyou for your expression of sadness - you are owed more than an apology.

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David Keig 12 October 2007

Sense of humour. ronald!

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Ronald Stroman 12 October 2007

words do define us. take care. now, go to sleep. the fools are out their cages with pencil & paper.

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