The Star Burns Bright In India Poem by Aldo Kraas

The Star Burns Bright In India



The star burns bright in India right at the sky
And from where I am standing here in the Indian village I can see the star That burns bright in India right at the sky
And I must say that it is beautiful to my naked eyes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 February 2011

What do you mean by 'at the sky'? It's gramatically wrong. It should have been 'in the sky'. Nevertheless the poem is rich in imagery. Keep it up.

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Aldo Kraas

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Sao Paulo Brazil
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