RieKairu Calo (march 8,1995 / Philippines)

This poem is even weaker than the last one I read from you. Sometimes it falls apart for the several grammatical and spelling errors it contains. Let`s start:

Poeple should be people, a lonely clouds should be a lonely cloud or lonely clouds. Talk to someone who knows grammar to explain this to you and why it should be so as I indicates here. Now comes a problem here that has to do with verb tenses. You wrote, to be share, and I think you might have meant to be shared. Here, too; you have; to be care, and I think you should write, to be cared. I am not going to explain here why this is for it would take too much space and this is not the venue for this sort of things. I am just giving some ideas on what I think you did wrong to the best of what I can do acoording to my knowledge of the tongue.

Take care and never give up on your hopes and dreams; you have still much time to make them come true.

The best to you.

Luis