Why does she look so disgruntled?
Why does her body seem shriveled?
Has life been unkind to her?
Have the angels deserted her?
She was once a joyful, happy go lucky girl
But the world seem to have taught her lessons
Lessons that no professor would have taught
Lessons that made her strong
Lessons that built her character
Lessons that you and I could not handle
She looked lost in thoughts
Thoughts not of yesterday
Thoughts of today
Thoughts of her future
Destiny was about to be printed bright but she didn't notice
Every girl needs a support system to help her go through life's disappointments, and yes they should make us more strong. Its a well thought piece
Hoplessness mixed with hope i like the way you chose your words to deliver the message.
Thanks for sharing the poem its quite as insight into lost thoughts but hope is there
'The world seem to have taught her lessons'! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks for sharing Rose. The character seem so lost in thoughts, that have hindered the brighter part of life. 'Destiny was about to be printed bright but she didn't notice'