The Smoke Spreading Under The Trees Poem by RIC BASTASA

The Smoke Spreading Under The Trees

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the smoke spread under the trees
from a certain burning firewood
on the house not far from where we talk

it spreads far
and this evening as i get too bored
we look at the hazy subject matter
as it moves farther to a certain visible distance

and despite the pollution
i imagine something more artful than this damage to my lungs

under the trees
the smog is beginning to shape itself
into a chine painting
of the dawn and its mist
like a poem written
by one of the poets that i love to read

Tu Fu, Li Po,
or was it Kulafu?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Estrella Baldemosa 10 October 2009

Li Po...yes, Tu Fu? ...i have doubts... but Kulafu? hahahahha you made laugh today Mr. Bastasa.

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