The Rose Who Lost Her Petals Poem by Twilight Whispers

The Rose Who Lost Her Petals

Rating: 5.0


Glorious silky-soft lashes of amber curling cups,
Dewdrops and raindrops trickling nervously down the slippery slope,
Curiously caressing the purity and innocence concealed within the flower,
Bravely waiting on the summit of the petal,
Hanging there like a newborn ocean pearl until it jumps,
Freely flyig through the sky like it had fallen forlornly from the clouds...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 29 January 2009

Nice thought provoking verses with a very good imagery applied...sensual in mood i guess...10

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Jim Norausky 29 January 2009

Nice images in this poem. I like it. Jim

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