The Ribbon Off That Box Of Chocolate Poem by jasmin bell

The Ribbon Off That Box Of Chocolate

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i see it in the sky,
i can't tell what it is,
i can only tell that it is red,
it falls so strangely,
as it gets closer my curiosity grows,
what could it be?
i have to squint the sun is in my eyes,
its only small,
i catch it in my hand,
where could it of come from?
i recognize it,
the ribbon off that box of chocolate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dulakshi Wakista 06 November 2009

very nice &so sweet poem.keep it up! all the best.10

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this is a sweet poem... :)

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Carol Gall 03 November 2009

was a moment remembered good poem 10

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