The Poor Poem by Cheryl Lynn Moyer Peele

The Poor

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Sharing their space
breathing in their air
I could not see them.

What they are
forever lies outside
my sense of knowing.

Their authentic movement
daily through their plane
of existence

lays beyond my words.

I can choose to be or not
whatever, whoever.......

They are, live, simply
as they always have,

where they are

and

who they must be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 03 November 2007

Sharing their space breathing in their air......................unique thoght and well penned as ilikethanks for sharing

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Cyclopseven R 16 October 2007

The pleased mind rarely care about other's pain. This is not human nature but devil's nature. good write.

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Ron Dragano 26 August 2007

Nice work Cheryl, without going into 'sentimental' - clear eyes aware of the blinders they and all of us wear...

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Not a member No 4 03 May 2007

Ah, 'blindness'. How little we see and yet how late we realise our deficiency! Philosophically and poetically impressive.

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