The Poems Have Abanoned Us Poem by Daniel Brick

The Poems Have Abanoned Us

Rating: 5.0


First Voice:

The poems are absent, they
have been absent for a week, a full week.
Oh, yes, some have arrived tardy, an hour tardy,
two hours tardy, a half-day even. It does not
matter, because the ones that do show up are not
the ones we want, the ones we need
to strengthen our fiber, to make our senses
keen and our minds fresh, and simply
to make the whole thing work. We've all known
for weeks that it's not working: the poems
we recite don't restore us, the poems we love
no longer reside inside us, we're empty, people!
We've been afraid to say this out loud, because
what remains silent, buried in heart-depth,
in mind-caverns, in voice-fissures,
what lies buried may be just one person's
fancy, one person's terror -
But I'm saying it out loud, and all of you
know what this means. S-A-Y I-T. Someone else,
anyone say it... The loss must be carried...
by all of us. Someone else! Say it!

Second Voice:

We all know he's given to
hyperbole. The way he praised
even novice poems. He could never
tell anyone the truth. Yes, yes,
poetry means so much to him, he wants
everybody to enjoy it, to profit from it,
to do it. That's all very fine, very noble,
very stupid. THIS is where it has gotten us!
But, my friends, the crisis is not terminal.
There are shreds of poems all around us,
discards, rough drafts, debris. We pick up
the detritus, no longer despised. Pieces
lying on the floors of workshops, pieces
littering the Great Hall, love poems left
on garden benches, sacred poems in church pews -
you can find them everywhere you turn. We will
assemble the fragments, work in teams and
build new anthologies. Stop listening to his kind.
HE WOULD HAVE YOU DESPAIR! Cast him out,
denounce him. Bundle up the fragments, form
committees of recovery, replace what has abandoned us:
It will be just as good, if not better.

Third Voice:

The poems have been whipped
into shape. The ones that returned
hid in the libraries on campus. We assume
they got help from followers of that disgraced
one. Several hundred of the fugitive poems
were huddled in the TRAVEL SECTION: the lowest
shelves, where books about places no one goes
were housed. You know, places like Death Valley,
Valley of the Kings, Central Amazonia, the steppes
across the Taiga, that sort of thing. In one day
we dragged them all out. We sent some to be pulped.
The others we whipped into shape. All in one afternoon.
Why not pulp them all, I say. The Iliad, Gilgamesh,
Pushkin's Eugene Onegin, Ezra Pound's Cantos,
All of Rilke, all of Shakespeare, all of - whatever.
Those poems always made me uncomfortable, like I
should be someone else... Pulp 'em all!

Saturday, December 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy fiction,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 27 December 2015

Daniel this is very intriguing, it gave me a sense of depravation deep within, a sense of loss that I didn't want to feel. Insipid emotions of intense feelings grasping hold of my heart and pulling me into the depths of a nether world that I wanted no part of. Then you scattered about the bits and pieces of poetry that were stranded in the back woods of minds past, those lines that made us angry and uncomfortable for being written in a style we didn't want to read. Emptiness, the void, buried in a terror of loss, unable to focus the truth of despair, so silently trying to replace the abandonment of our souls in fragments of disgrace. Wow! You totally captured my mind with this poem, my whole being in fact. So intensely deep, profound, complex in it's simplicity! Fantastic painting of literature now lying everywhere and awaiting renewal. Superb write, totally love it, Daniel Thank you for sharing this one. RoseAnn

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Daniel Brick 02 January 2016

Do you remember over a year ago when you wondered how I found things in your poems you had not anticipated? And I assured you your poems had remarkable depths a sensitive, alert reader will find. Well, now it is my turn to be dazzled by your response to this poem. You have opened it up and shown me its possibilities through your experiences in reading it. Isn't it wonderful how we help each other understand our own creativity? ! A sensitive reader completes the creative work we do in solitude by sharing his/her impressions.

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Pamela Sinicrope 26 December 2015

You are onto something here. I feel like I've read parts of this poem before, but can't remember exactly where. Your Port Trakl writings? I think this is the start of something special. Keep it going. This is the beginning of an epic adventure, a story, a collection of poems. The imagery is striking and poignant and the voices I love. How many voices will emerge to put together the shards of lost poems?

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Daniel Brick 02 January 2016

I had not thought of this possibility of a series of poems on this theme. But once you shared that impression with me it made perfect sense. I love the way you inhabit the poems you read and see aspects of their living being which I the writer have not seen. This brings out the notion that poetry - both writing it and reading it - is community-based: we are in this art together, co-creators in the best sense of the word.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 December 2015

Fabulous fantasy. Insightful and entertaining too. Thanks for sharing. Ten points.

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