The Old Man Poem by Cristina M. Moldoveanu

The Old Man



just as everything is in its place
the cracked pitcher in the cellar's window
the maize porridge pot amid the veranda flowers
the knife sharpener in the kitchen table's drawer
the squared clock hung slanting on the wall

day after day the old man
takes off the straw hat from its hook even if it's cloudy
pulls it down on his head with both hands
opens the street gate till it hits the wall
upright like a thistle he looks down the road

under the hat colored like an autumn sun
it gets warmer
his face furrows overturn a smile
as if the moist earth sliced by the old times plough
under the steps of sons grandsons and grand-grandsons

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem dedicated to my grandfather, who lived in a quiet little village in Southern Transylvania. May he rest in peace.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 May 2014

Hello poet Christina, I think your grandfather would be proud, you have captured a keen part of growing old, he is blessed to have you as I'm sure you feel the same of him. I enjoyed. I just posted my poem An Old Soldier along with the musical recitation. If you have time, please check it out and let me know your thoughts. Thanks, Loyd

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