The Night Shift Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

you have weaved words in meaningful sentences..... very well written...

The day and night are a duo, they switch shift to and fro, like conjoint twins who can not let go! Well penned Kesav! High marks.

You have penned an interesting paradox here. Surely one would expect more crime to occur during the hours of the moon, and yet I've no doubt you have checked your facts and base this poem upon them. Irrespective, the poem works very well. It has a nice phlegmatic edge to it that appeals. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Vivid in the imagery, and subtle in the metaphors employed. A thought provoking write.

Wow! ! ! good fight between day and night.... both look strong...

An insightful write with a captivating title. The difference between day and night has been cleverly crafted. Wonderful thoughts to ponder about.

Pleasant poem; Good guidance.

i see poetry well applied

A very clever write. Anyone would jump to ideas with the title itself. So this is a stunner and describes well how your mind works to mislead the reader and plant something else to make the other look stupid after all. nicely written, thanks - arya

hey these is a sweet lullaby indeed.. lovely write again... yeah i wana cover my self in a blanket and sleep forever too.... some times i wish i can sleep forever.... with lots of love shan