The Mystery We Are Poem by Sandra Feldman

The Mystery We Are

Rating: 5.0


Thoughts that come,
And thoughts that go,
Why they come,
We'll never know
What makes you,
The one you are?
Each a Mystery,
Great by far.

Therapists,
Have tried to help,
But even they,
Get tangled,
In themselves.

Saturday, July 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: cloudy,human condition
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 31 July 2017

Well-done. Has an attitude about it. Not the usual Sandra Feldman attitude but a very valid one all the same. I really am enamored with this piece. It's sassy, it's understanding, it's questing, it's compassionate, and it's just a teensy bit mocking in the last five lines but mocking in a we're all together in this kind of way... not a hurtful way.. It's... It's Just Got Attitude, Love it.10++++++++ and on my fav list

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Laurie Van Der Hart 31 July 2017

Creo que te entiendo perfectamente, Sandra. Quizás es gracias a mi propia locura!

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Sandra Feldman 29 July 2017

You got the point! We are all more or less unstable, a mystery to ourselves and to others'. this is my feeling, which you don't have to agree with or accept. but remember De musico, poeta y loco, todos tenemos un poco We all have in us some of the madness of the musician and the poet w

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