The Lie Poem by Jackson Wings

The Lie



Life is an illusion created by the lies told by the teachers and parents to disguise real life to make it seem better. If you have the guts take your life go to the sky's see the world for what truly lies. The one's who see this life are not dead they are more alive than the ones on the ground the see the truth while the one back home all see a disguised lie told from story's the sky's is where peace truly lie so grow a pair and try to fly to escape the lie and when you die people will cry when I die no one will cry. Everyone will say I could've stayed but No i couldn't I had to end it had to defriend them so i can defend them from the lies. turn on the lights turn on the music make sure your seen make sure your known make sure the lies inside belong to the unknown not the ones who say you can them cause in this world you cant trust the world no one knows what it is to be alone till they actually are and they want to die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 14 October 2016

Wow. There is a lot in here. A lot of heart. A lot of questioning (which is always necessary and good) . A lot of insight into the facade this world often presents, and the challenge to find the truth behind all the camouflage, all the make-up, all the masks and pretending. Well done and good work. Thanks for asking the important questions.

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