The Last Good-Bye Poem by Stephanie MIller

The Last Good-Bye

Rating: 5.0


near to the door
ha paused to stand
as he took his class ring
off her hand.
All those who watched
didn't speak as a silent tear,
ran down his cheek
and htroughtout his mind,
the memories ran
of the moments they walked and ran
hand and hand in the sand
but now her eyes were so terrible cold
for he would never again have her to hold
They all watched in silence
as he bert over
whisperd the words
' i love you ' in her ear.
He touched her face and started to cry
as he put on his class ring and wanted to die.
Just then, the wind began to blow as they
lowered her casket into the snow....
This is what happens when friends let friends drink and drive

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dav Coulton 12 January 2008

wow. the ending just hit me like a hammer. real heart felt

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Sylvi Sylva 12 January 2008

powerful message, vividly expressed, a must read for all! topten i say

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