The Grace Poem by Baharak Barzin
The Grace
From the very start
He loves us
We had him in very close
We were loved by him
And all who do exist
I know we fell
But don't feel down
Cause we have him yet
We all went astray
We hurt each other with the things we want to catch
But don't feel down
Cause we have him now
He is here in every breath of you
He surrounds us
By his grace
Let's drown in his grace
And enjoy joining him
Forever and a day
Thank you for including the reason we need grace: We hurt each other with the things we want to catch. Nicely done!
He whom graces our each soul with word's discerned in grace has knowledge found.. iip
He is here in every breath of you He surrounds us By his grace Let's drown in his grace And enjoy joining him Forever and a day..... i understood your poem as a very spiritual poem. am i right? thank you very much. enjoyed reading it. tony
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5/2/2024 2:16:30 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The confidence you express in this poem is very reassuring. You don't overstate it which would be counter-productive in any case. But your understatement has a very particular effect on me: it shows you are so certain this grace is real, and is RIGHT NOW flooding the world in its generous presence that you only need to remind us to welcome it. There is no need to be shrill or demanding on your part. We have already received the blessings of this grace, we just have not realized it. That's the gentle message of your poem.