The Feeling Poem by lindsey kidd

The Feeling

Rating: 5.0


I can feel the tears slowly,
rolling down my cheeks.
I can feel my heart slowly
breaking once again.
I wonder how I could have
fallen in such a trap.
The I realize, I was fooled
into believing that me & you were true.
It was all camoflagued.
The tears just keep streaming
down my blotched face.
My makeup is smeared.
My heart is beating faster& faster.
I just can't believe it!
It's over!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Commendable work here, Lindsey. Mellifluous stucture...smooth, crisp. Resplendent imagework employed.Well Done, young lady. ~ FjR ~

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