The Echoes A Love Sonnet Poem by Daniel Brick

The Echoes A Love Sonnet

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How do I stop the echo of you
in everything I sense? Should I block
the songs of birds because their trills
remind me of your voice speaking sweetly?
Should I cover my eyes with the darkest
glasses so the sun's radiance, which is
so much like your being, is invisible.
How can I avoid touching the soft flesh
of fruit, which remind my hands of
your face and long hair? And what of
the air which may still be circling
your scent around and around? Must I
shut down my senses and descend into
a purely interior life devoid of passion,
and bereft of the hope that we might
yet again embrace each other heart to heart?

Tuesday, January 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 29 October 2018

It is really difficult to control emotions when the love echoes back to you the old songs. Nicely written,10+++

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Simone Inez Harriman 09 March 2017

How heaven and earth become so alive with all the senses flooding the emotions, and how excruciatingly the conflicts of love can be when Cupid wickedly wounds with his arrows of desire.

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Daniel Brick 10 March 2017

Yes, it's so true about Cupid. Despite the setbacks ans failures who could give up the ALIVENESS of the Love Experience. Even a one-sided love which is not filfilled evokes that amazing aliveness of senses, heart, mind! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2017

With the muse of love and life! So much like your being. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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