The Dread Of Dead Birds, 'The Darkness Will Understand' Poem by Leila Samarrai

The Dread Of Dead Birds, 'The Darkness Will Understand'



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The dread of dead birds
In the ambient of a stake-out
Is the song of blood

Exists
A slightly higher pitched thought
Like the distances
Lave themselves with silence

Sail away eyes down Attila's ill-whirlpools
Dig out the birds
Which are self-sufficient
Convinced
That the most beautiful voices
Reach
From dead lines in the ground

We need them
At the beginning and the end of love
We always summon them then

The Dread Of Dead Birds, 'The Darkness Will Understand'
Friday, January 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
cry of dead birds that are or should be messengers of love and mythological freedom is antique metaphor of a dying world and everything in it dies or is doomed to fail.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 19 February 2016

Your note of explanation helps me get attuned to the birds. Attila was a conqueror. Love in its phase of growth is also a conqueror that believes it can overcome death. Love seems drawn to deathly things and unpassable gulfs, to prove its power of overcoming.// I think I get the feel of your second line In the ambient of a stake-out, but it is a bit confusing. Does it means something like the ambit staked out widely? / Unfortunately, the phrase stake-out in English makes me think of an ambush laid by policemen to catch a criminal. When blood sings it casts its life-force widely, and hence it moves in the ambit of those birds who once soared so bravely. Your poems are like condensed code that make the reader think about history and passion. Fluidity allows concentration. I can follow the fluidity with effort. It leaves me with nostalgia for a natural fluid state.

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Daniel Brick 08 August 2015

My head is spinning. This poem eludes my mind when I try to tie it down to an articulated statement. It resists paraphrase. But I do believe the meaning jumped into my consciousness where images are happy to exist as images I kept thinking of the ancient custom of reading the will of the gods and/or the course of future events in the entrails of birds. Is that relevant? What the entrails reveal or the message the birds carry could be summarized unb Matthew Arnold's lines: We are CAUGHT BETWEEN TWO WORLDS, ONE DEAD, THE OTHER DYING TO BE BORN.

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