The Difference Between Good And Bad Poem by silenced work

The Difference Between Good And Bad

Rating: 4.5


When you rule you're cool,
But you dont look inside the 'pool'

The 'pool' is 'cruel'
But not a fool

You search the clue
Not knowing that you're a 'tool'

'Tool' of the system
With out a soul.

So when you're hopeless
And feel sore, dont blame me
That I'm the one who made you fall.

Tuesday, June 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
pool - real and nice people.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 September 2014

Well put together with a powerful message. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

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