The Day You Left Poem by abhilasha bhatt

The Day You Left

Rating: 5.0


The day you left
Life has deserted me
All the days were colorless
Evenings were all odorless
Nights left me sobbing
Dawns were shattered
Ways sulked
Destination lost in emptiness
Sky was weeping
Breezes were crying
My existence was broken
Breaths got miffed
All the moments became lifeless
You killed all my whiff I had for you
I wish he would have remain a stranger
Our paths would not collide
Then there would be no pain no wounds
I do not want to be in your life again
Want to lost in my own dreams again

Sunday, November 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,betrayer,life,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 30 November 2016

A very impressive and touching poem...........................................

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The Preacher 30 November 2016

Voice of a broken heart! Fabulous lines :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 November 2016

Odorless! ! Loneliness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 27 November 2016

Detachment is not that easy yet in life things move on.....10++++

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Mithilesh Yadav 27 November 2016

Painful...... Heart touching......... Pain is penned with all your heart.... Thanx for sharing

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