The Darkness Within Poem by Crystle Jones

The Darkness Within

Rating: 4.2


A murkey blackness radiating from the depths of my mind.
From the shadows to the air,
Together they entwine.

A greater evil of which, has never been known,
it s presence sence a sensation far deeper then skin or bone.
Painfull memories and suicidal thoughts errupt.
Even the most pure, shall become currupt.

Many will be blinded by lies, for years to come.
The truth shall be seen by few, maybe even none.

Everything we know.
Everything we are.
Every time we bleed.
Every little scare.

False memories dance within my head.
I remember every tear, i ever shed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Everything we know. Everything we are. Every time we bleed. Every little scare....... we know but don't admit what we are... beautiful write and i congrate you on that.. beautiful presentatation....10 I openly admitted as 'I am disgrace' kindly read and offer critical comment. I love to hear from you.

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Shagun Khera 17 June 2009

beautiful ending...a nice poetry...darkness is always delicious to devour..

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