The Dark In Me Poem by Michael Carlson

The Dark In Me

Rating: 3.5


I feel it.
It breaths.
It's inside of me,
It hides,
Waiting.
It waits until we're alone.
It pounces,
It shreds my soul.
We struggle in a never ending embrace.
I cannot see the end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reyna Julia 26 January 2009

That was really good.

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 August 2008

I only gave this a 7 because there are some questions I need answers to. A reader should not be left like this. GW62

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