The Crossword Poem by Dermot McGarthy

The Crossword

Rating: 5.0


They poured trust, entangled with,
Remote memories of lust,
In cradle type recognition,
Of one who has traveled,
So far with the other,
On life's cusp.
Six decades of life could be witnessed,
Gushing from their eyes,
Playfully cherishing sameness,
Without the cheap disguise.
Sensual, caring, stroking, sharing,
Letter, word, adjective, noun,
Five across, three down.
Their prize glaring at them,
The puzzle complete,
This is their love eternal,
An afterlife's heartbeat.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The Poet observing an older couple doing a crossword together, transfixed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 20 August 2013

a good write enjoyed

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Hazel Durham 16 March 2013

Brilliant observation of an older couple in rhythm, with each others thoughts, dreams, regrets and living for the moment with such treasured simplicity is a rare gift. Their life is their love for each other, so beautiifully nourished from the inside out!

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