The Closed Coffee Shop Poem by Susan Lacovara

The Closed Coffee Shop



Many a meal of honey drizzled handouts
Standing on your breadline of love
Holding back the pain of starvation
For any tiny morsel offered
Crumbs in my palm
Sandwiched words
That left me hungry for a proper daily diet
A meager nourishment
For my never ending appetite

I was thin and frail when you first fed me well
With heavy syrup from the fruit of desire
Pourings of cream flooding my cup
Your soft hand wiping my mouth
The banquet before me stretched on and on
I to think it would not end
Stayed long after the plates had been cleared
Leaving only the bitter aftertaste to digest
And the noticeable weight lost
That comes from losing a lover's words

Thursday, November 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(11/03/16) For the one who keeps me hungering.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 03 November 2016

Such vivid imagery. Imaginative and painfully detailed. The images of food and hunger overlaid on love and desire produce an internal conflict in the reader that is uncomfortably compelling and memorable. Well done.

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