The Blue Lagoon Poem by Sandra Feldman

The Blue Lagoon

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The Blue Lagoon,
And the full Moon,
Were lovers in the past,
But as in life,
So filled with gloom,
Their Love was not to last.

The Blue Lagoon,
Has no more room,
For tears of Cristal light,
The Moon has gone,
Behind the Clouds,
And we're alone tonight.

The painful though,
That Memory's brought,
Is here with me to stay
And like the Moon,
I contemplate,
To soon be on my way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 26 July 2015

A fabled love becomes a failed love. The moonlight on the lagoon is a beautiful image of wholeness, with Moonlight described as TEARS OF CRYSTAL LIGHT but now the moon hides in the clouds and and the moonlight cannot reach the still waters. Somehow their energizing love must be restored, it's a cosmic inspiration and we cannot be without its victory over the forces of darkness. But something has disrupted the harmony of the pair. How can they be restored?

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Lyn Pendleton 17 February 2013

Hi, this is really a good poem I think. Like it alot. Lyn

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