The Bee And The Rose Poem by M. Asim Nehal

The Bee And The Rose

Rating: 5.0


I walked away from the rose,
leaving it to glow and grow.
I have no regrets whatsoever
Yet the hurt loiters with tears

Pleasure, satisfaction, and gratitude
I am happy that I was not pretentious

What I did was knowingly
And my heart endorsed it willingly

I wrapped my love in autumn bliss
that will not bring me to my knees

I can carry myself now.
To some other place till I bow

I paid the price of my love.
And have no regrets, it's behove

As I cannot suffer alone for the rest of the day
I searched something else as my prey

This is neither a tribute nor a self-punishment.
Only a wish to live and see more rose like this again.

Friday, September 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,sacrifice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 07 September 2018

Transparency brings satisfaction in life because of no duplicity. Thanks, Asim ji. Pleasure, satisfaction, and gratitude I am happy that I was not pretentious

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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2018

Thanks Much Shri. Rajnish ji

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Suzon Albert 31 August 2020

Sacrifice never go in vain. And to sacrifice is the greatness of humans 10

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Freni Karaluthara 22 February 2019

I walked away from the rose, leaving it to glow and grow. what a beautiful expression.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 September 2018

Let rose grow and glow with light, beauty and fragrance. In autumn bliss, love is interestingly wrapped. Price of love is paid in deep love. A sweet sensation this poem gives is very interesting. An outstanding poem on nature is well penned.10

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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2018

Thank u so much for your generous comments, Sir.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 September 2018

I came across this poem through the endless advertisements right at the end of a poem I read. The title drew me to visit this poem. A poignant yet beautiful poem. Yes, in life we have to do things knowingly and that our heart must endorse it willingly. Well crafted and executed write....10 Sorry, the endless advertisements have deprived me to exercise my write to vote for this marvelous poem.

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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2018

Thanks Rose, I appreciate your comments and understand how difficult it is to rate, your reading is more than your rating.

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Aqua Flower 08 September 2018

Truth is always the way to go whether it is painful or not. This is a lovely piece full of the emotions that love and loss brings. Suffering will pass and new love will be embraced! Nice poem!

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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2018

Thanks much Aqua...

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