The Beach Poem by Ashmita Kamlesh

The Beach

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I walk into a big place
I see the bright sky
I was walking
The sun was coming out from the sky
It was amazing
As I placed my own two feet on the soft sand, I felt small waves of water break on my feet.
It was when the wind blow on my face
It was like something pushing away
The sun was setting down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 26 November 2009

did some theorising and then setteled for a simple explanation the poem is just exactly what it appears simple lovely and charming.... cheers

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Eyan Desir 20 November 2009

This reminds me I must go on the beach..thank you

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