The Audacity To Think Poem by Poetical Analysis

The Audacity To Think

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The god above tradition
Is an agent of sedition

Examining that devil as one would the Moon
Until the truth can finally bloom

Explaining the reflection is an inverted view
Of all that you are & all that you do

Breaching the rim of perceivable sight
Expanding the very concept of Life

Crossing the portal through primordial waters of Birth
To become one with Mother Earth

Breaker of laws that foment flaws, & pain
The greatest threat to the most sovereign reign

The audacity to think creates all that is real
Yet is superseded by the audacity to feel


5/11/16

Wednesday, May 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: education
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 11 May 2016

Amazingly deep and profound thoughts through feelings, lit up my mind like lightening strikes, somehow making sense of all that we do while expanding our sight into another dimension of this life. Totally absorbed my mind and intellect, provoking thoughts out into the open where I can jumble and mix them like a chemist in an inner lab. Wonderful poem, loved it immensely! Is it in line with your thought pattern? Thank you for sharing and many thanks for appreciating my poem, On The Edge Of Every Moment with your comments. RoseAnn

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