Ten Commandments. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Ten Commandments.

Rating: 5.0


How old are
The Commandments
We don't obey!
Why, Oh why
Are we Monsters
That Monsters
Stay?

Shame, Shame!
On our inhumanity
Here, feared
Forever,
To stay!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'Man's inhumanity to Man', Robert Burns. Still practiced in such horrific ways, , ,
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 12 September 2022

Very true dear Sandra, nicely crafted poem worth of being read again and again.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 September 2022

Shame on inhuman behaviour of man. When will man learn? A poem most relevant to the present times and current issues......10

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N N P Parameswaran Nasarudheen 11 September 2022

Good observation of this world.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 September 2022

I hope, my friend, that this will serve as a wake up call to each and everyone who can read this moving poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 September 2022

A very powerful poem. Lines that cry out against inhumanity. So sad that many of us never cease to destroy their own brothers.

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